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Friday 22 October 2021

Persuasive Writing

 Hello today I'm going to be sharing my persuasive writing work that I have done I hope you like it

Here It is

You should brush your teeth twice a day

I strongly believe that you should brush your teeth more than twice a day because brushing your teeth more than twice a day keeps it fresh consistently, but it really depends on how your brushing your teeth and what your using but make sure you brush your teeth correctly. Brushing your teeth not only keeps them clean but freshens up the smell of your breath dentists also don't have to do clean your teeth and gums if they aren't clean.

Additionally on how brushing your teeth more than twice a day is good for you. Because it keeps it fresh all day long and people don't have to smell your bad breath because that just going to be disrespectful to you and the people your talking to. 

Secondly how you should brush your teeth. So what is brushing your teeth all about you might say?Brushing your teeth is all about you helping yourself remove food and plaque. The plaque in your teeth normal forms on your teeth and it can contain bacteria. After you eat something that contains sugar the bacteria in the plaque starts to attack your teeth witch is why your teeth tend to fall out and that's another reason why your should brush your teeth more than twice a day.

Finally Brushing your teeth helps dentist. Brushing your teeth also means dentists don't have to do as much work, but also saves you money so you don't have to go spending your money and risk getting hurt while getting your teeth pulled out because no one wants to get there teeth hurt or broken.

In conclusion all of what is said not only helps you but also helps people around such as dentists and people your talking so they don't have to smell your bad breath in the afternoon. This  brings me back to my point that your should brush your teeth twice a day!

I hope you like my blog post.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Nuu, Great Post. One thing I liked about your post was your opinion about brushing your teeth. I also relate that people should brush there teeth twice a day. There in my opinion is nothing wrong with this post. Have a good day. Tom

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